I made this brand an extra $10k (probably)

Here's how

Hey there,

Last week, I received this email after signing up to a brands email list:

I like how they showcase their community, good social proof.

However, it is lacking many many key elements of a good welcome email.

Including the 10% off code they offer in the pop up form!

So, I asked them if they wanted me to redesign it for free and they were keen…

This is what I came up with:

Objectively better if you ask me!

Here’s why:

  1. Hero Image

We built out a distinct hero image (an image that takes up the area before you need to scroll down) that highlights the headline, some of the products, the offer, and the button.

  1. USP (Unique Selling Point)

Focusing on Unique Selling Points is great in your welcome email. This highlights what makes you different. Deliver this is a succinct way like we did with the 4 blocks.

  1. Social Proof

Now it’s all well and good to highlight what makes you good with your USP’s…

But you need to back up these claims.

Right afterwards, showcase some flattering reviews that support what you said earlier.

Then simply just add in another call to action!

These are the main 3 things you need in an email and I guarantee this will perform tons better.

AND… once this brand applies this style across all their flows they will make a ton more email revenue.

Steal this design layout for yourself.

Book a call with us if you want a free design for your brand.

All the best,

Angus Cowan

MonetiseMe // The DTC Growth Letter